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Use transitional words and/or phrases to better show relationships in the following:
Sally wanted to walk her dog. She couldn't find the dog's leash. She found a rope. The rope was frayed. The frayed rope was unusable. She found an old scarf. She wrapped the scarf around the dog's collar. Sally walked the dog around block using the scarf as a leash.
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